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Tuesday, May 17, 2016

Taylors mistake

   
The salty water shimmers reflecting the bright summer sun.
The sound of happiness echos through my ear.
Peckish seagulls soar around like synchronized swimmers in the sky.
Wet dogs gallop along the sand line.
Wild waves clash and out back surfboards glide along the waves.
The wind is strong it pulls the sand away with it 
into the sky, the bright blue sky.

3 comments:

  1. I love it. It is very discrptid as I was reading I got a nice picture in my head:summer��

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  2. I love your first sentence! It reminds me of when I go to the beach.
    It also puts a really cool picture in my head.
    Good job.
    Abbey.

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  3. I loved it I think you should continue to write like this.

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